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Adv. In Anthro 14

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Adv. In Anthro 14

Final chapter of the first series.

(Previously our team has left the valley of taurs and arrived at tianu's fortress. Having found a window and opportunity they quietly sneak inside only to find a pair of huge, red eye's glaring at them out of the dark.)

They all stared up at the menacing eye's before them, druk preparing to draw his swords for a fight when thunder steps out and snarls.

"I've had enough of this crap, this beast is going down!"

Snatching one of druk's swords from it's holster, thunder charges forward at the thing in the dark.

"Thunder, noo!!!"

Roxy shouted but it was too late. Staring him down, thunder leaps up to the face of it and brings the sword down like a sledge hammer on the creature. Upon impact, one eye pops out onto the floor while the other one it hanging off the face. A loud rip sound is heard as he slices all the way through it's snout.

The eye that hit the floor rolls up to nova and is glowing brightly.

"What the blazes!? Yuck, thunder! You knocked it's eye out at me!"

Nova reeled back from the redeye before him and swipes it away. Fluffy creates a orb of light and has it float above them, getting brighter enough to see the whole room. They all stare out at a bunch of cotton foam and a few wires in front of them where the beast once stood. Thunder steps back and is realizing what he's slain.

"You mean to tell me that thing was a giant plushie!? Man that jackal is sick, who would want go cuddle something that ugly?"

He said out loud, examining the remains of the mutilated plush toy before him. It had purple skin with an green tongue. The right eye still dangling from the face. It resembled a dragon and rat mixed together.

Ricky breaks the silence of the room by laughing a little.

"Hahahaha...good one mate. You killed a big squishy toy! That's a great victory over the soft kind, hahaha!"

Thunder growls and plants the sword in his paws into the redeye on the floor and shattering it. The glow emanating from it stops immediately. That cut ricky's laughing short as they go to the door and look out to make sure that ruckus has not alerted the guards to their presence in the fortress.

The hallway is deserted, almost abandoned by any standard. Dust inches thick coats the floors and the windows are smudged from years of not being properly cleaned.

"We must be in an old section of this place."

Max points out to them the front of the door they just came through. In big colors like a child's writing is scribble saying "Princess tianu's room" on the door.

"That must've been her room when she was little. Explains the creepy toy then huh."

Ricky says as suddenly they hear the sounds three people approaching down the hallway towards them. Quickly hiding back behind the door as the footsteps come around the corner, fluffy gasp upon seeing eptio being pushed and shoved forward by shroga and snarling.

Eptio has been beaten and there's cuts and bruises on his arms and face. Few droplets of strawberry syrup fell to the floor leaving a trail behind in the dust and pawprints on the dirty floor.

"Its eptio! We gotta save him now!" fluffy says before being silenced by nova.

"No, we must find out what they're doing and where shroga is leading him. Once we know that, we'll get him loose."

Druk nods in agreement and waits till they've almost gone out of sight to take the lead. Followed by nova, then ricky, fluffy and Roxy. Max and thunder keep an eye out behind them for any surprise guest.

They watch them go down a few more corridor before ascending a long flight of stairs to the forbidden chamber. Reaching twin doors eptio stares at a passage written in red above the doors.

"All who trespass here shall perish for eternity in pain."

Looking back at shroga, eptio sees him shiver slightly at the inscription.

"Get going, mistress is not the type to be patient with important thing's like this. Now get in there and retrieve the skull of croya!"

Eptio reaches for the left door handle and It snaps off in his paw.

"I take it you jerks don't believe in attention to details?"

He mumbles grabbing the other door handle and pulling back. The door is almost glued shut as he has to yank on it a couple of times before there's a loud crack and it screeches loudly opening up.

Inside It a single bedroom the size of a house. Complete with couches, luxurious chairs, an impressive fireplace big enough to walk into. And a big bed laying in the center of it all. Everything has been deteriorated due to the passing of years and not properly being taken care of. The seats are all shredded and in pieces while the bed is leaning to the left from it's wooden legs having fallen to termite damage.

And resting on top, under sheets with holes torn through is a skeleton of a taur laying on it's side. The jaw is open as if locked in a yawn.

"I'm not touching that disgusting thing, get it yourself you creep."

Shroga growls and looks at eptio in rage.

"You will get it or you'll not leave this room alive, now pick it up!"

Standing beside the bed and staring down at the skull, eptio gulps before reaching out and taking it in his paws. There's a crack noise as it separates from the neck and shroga winced hearing it echo around the room.

"Oh man this is nasty, I should just throw this at you."

Eptio groans looking at it in his paws, hollow sockets looking back at him.

A dull thump and a body hitting the floor gets his attention. Turning back to look, he sees druk and nova standing over an unconscious shroga in the doorway. Fluffy breaks through them and rushes up to him.

Seeing fluffy, eptio tosses the skull back on the bed and wipes his paws clean. He runs to her and they both embrace each other in a long hug.

"I thought I'd never see you again, my love." he says, brushing her hair.

Tears streaking down her muzzle, fluffy holds onto him and smiles.

"I'm so glad your alive, and safe now eptio."

Max and thunder walk over to the bed to look at the remains there while nova is inspecting the room.

"These people never thought about using a cemetery or something? Ain't no way a corpse is gonna be in my house."

Max states, roxy walked up to eptio still hugging fluffy.

"Eptio, is kit still alive? Is he here?"

She dreads hearing the answer but is desperately wanting to know at the same time.

Holding fluffy by his side as she heals his wounds, he looks at everyone then turns to roxy.

"Yes, kit's still here roxy. She's got him chained to the floor in the main room, awaiting for me and that slug over there to return with the skull of her old Fox mate."

"She's trying to do the reincarnation spell isn't she. To bring croya back from the dead with this."

Nova points towards the skull and picks it up. He can feel a tiniest bit of warmth from the skull. He walks back to the door carrying it with him.

"Nova, what are you doing with that? We've got to destroy it now."

Max grabbed his shoulder lightly to stop him. The rest all gather round to see what the plan is.

"Not yet, if kit is still down there then we're going to need something to use as leverage. A bargaining chip if you will, to exchange for kit's freedom from tianu." Nova explains to them.

"But we can't let her have it. If she gets hold of that skull, we'll all lose. Not just us but this entire dimension will fall to destruction. Our dimension too possibly." Fluffy points out, as roxy looks away.

"She won't get it, as soon as we break kit loose I'll smash it on the floor. I promise we'll get him back."

Max states out loud and hugs roxy, she smiles and hugs him back. Waking up on the floor, shroga looks up to see them all in the room together.

"Intruders! You all will pay dearly for aaah!!"

Druk had grabs him by his nape and slammed him against the wall. Drawing his sword, he puts the sharp tip to the alligators neck and dares him to move.

"You will obey my every command. You will lead us back to the main chamber and allow us free passage from any guards posted or I will make your head roll across this floor right now. Understood filth?"

Not wanting to be a headless specter, shroga nods weakly.

"Y-yes, fine! I will take you to mistress chamber and allow you admittance. Just don't kill me!"


With nova carrying the skull, shroga leads them all through the castle. Halting every guard from attacking them. He opens the doors to the main room and everyone gasp at the sight. There is several wizards chanting in a circle over to the left, tianu is standing at her throne looking down at me. I am trying to pry the shackles off of my wrist.

Tianu looks up as the door opens, very angry to see the gang right behind shroga. About to call the guards she stops when nova steps out holding the skull between his paws. She glares at him furious.

"How dare you! Come into my castle and take my beloved croya's skull, GIVE IT TO ME NOW!!!"

Shroga is released and scurried up to her begging for her forgiveness. He picked a very bad time though...you don't want to be in front of a very angry sorceress when she's mad.

"I'm so sorry, my mistress! They jumped me and forced me to bring them back here."

She growls at him and grabs his snout in her paw.

"I've had enough of your incompetence, it's time I deal with you once and for all!"

Opening his mouth, tianu creates a black slimy orb and shoves it down his throat. Letting go he tries to gag himself but the orb has begun to fill his insides with it's substance. He chokes and is flailing around trying to stop it from spreading more.

"Oh god, what did she do to him.." nova mumbles.

The black ooze fills his eye's and is dripping from his mouth and nostrils, pouring out of his ears. Gurgling noises are all he can make as his lungs fill up with the toxic liquid and he collapses to the floor, dead.

His body continues to breakdown until a black puddle of ooze is all that remains of him.

I am in shock from seeing such brutality and the rest of the group is frozen, wondering what tianu will do if their plan doesn't work.

"I should have done that ages ago, hahaha. Now on to the task at hand."

She walks down the steps followed by a few of her servants. She stands right in front of nova, glaring at the prize in his paws.

"Give me the skull and I might let you live to see the light of another day."

She offers nova, but he shakes his head and points to me.

"Nope, release kit from those chains and you can have this skull. If you don't, I'll break it to pieces right now."

She snarled at nova, he raises his paw up high with the skull pointed down at the floor. Everyone behind him is saying to do it. Tianu raises her paws up to stop him.

"Alright alright! Wait! Fine I will release the taur. In exchange for the skull."

"Let him loose now." nova demands.

Seeing no other choice, tianu turns to look at me and snaps her fingers. The shackles pop open immediately and I stand up on my own, a bit weakly.

"There, he is free. Now give me croya's skull!"

Tianu reaches out for it but nova holds it beyond her grasp.

"Nu unh, not til were out of this place. I'll leave it by the door after were gone."

"Your not going to get out of here alive if you don't give it to me NOW! Guards!"

Behind the group, about fifty armored monsters of different varieties slowly approach max and thunder. As they all look around at them just about ready to attack, one of tianu's servants got close enough to nova and snatches the skull while he's off guard. I try to warn him but it's too late.

"Nova on you left! Look out!!"

Fluffy creates another one of those orbs like she did in the house and fires it into the oncoming crowd of warrior's.

"Nivarian Sonicia Wavorul!!!"

It swells to the size of a beach ball before exploding, knocking half of them against the wall. Tianu and her servants immediately retreat to the throne when she sees one has the skull of croya in his hands.

"Take that to the wizard's, guards! Seize that taur and bring him here!"


"Yes, your majesty! Get him!"

I am running to join the fight, wanting to get to roxy when four guards pounce on my back and are dragging me down. Roxy is fighting with a guard and he knocks her down on the floor. Nova is surrounded with druk and thunder, max is clawing at another guard while fluffy and ricky are battling. Eptio is beating the heck out of a guard that hit him when he was in his cell.

I am struggling to get free when I see her fall and it enrages me.


"Rrraaaaawwwrrr!!!!"

I grab the guard on my shoulder and toss him out the window. Kicks two more off of my back and jumps throwing the last one to bounce into a concrete post. More guards come at me as I start to run and the wizard's are chanting the final parts of the spell when they get the skull in the middle of their circle.

A orange mist rises up and swirls around the skull as it levitates in midair. A ghostly outline is clearly visible. It stares at the wizard's around it and sees tianu, the figure floats over the casters and moves to be in front of her. She is almost crying to see croya here again and smilies at him.

"My darling croya, I've missed you so so much..."

She reaches out and tries to feel of his face, her paw passes right through it. He is looking at her, so happily.

"Tianu, my love. I feel like it's been an eternity since I've been lost. What all has happened?"

She looks away from him and tells all that transpired after his death. He is angered by this information and is looking around the room at the battle that is raging. I got closer to the fight before ten huge guards pinned me to the floor. Fluffy has been making orbs and knocking piles of them back but more keep coming. Nova and druk are slicing away at the air to keep them at a distance. Thunder, max and ricky have armed themselves with weapons the fallen guard's have dropped and are thrashing the oncoming flood before them. Eptio is fending off guards. Tianu shouts to bring me over to her as croya looks at my form then back to her.

"Guard's! Bring forth the taur now, so we may complete the ceremony."

They drag me backwards, clawing and kicking at them.

"Let go of me you creeps...ugh! Roxy!! Hold on!"

She hears my shouts and looks at me, thunder hits the guard that knocked her down and helps get her off the floor. Together they all fight and are outnumbered four to one.

I am pulled over to tianu, energy drained from struggling. I look up to find a huge orange fox ghost standing beside her. I gasp and try to get loose to back away.

"N-no...I'm not gonna stand here and do nothing. Let me go right now!"


Tianu laughs at me feeble attempts to get away, she smiles and pets my face.

"Oh Kit, don't worry. In a few moments you'll be history. Nothing of you will exist anymore."

She glances over to croya and waves her paw at me.

"Take your new body, my love so we can be together again."

He grins and begin to float up above me. The guards hold me up straight and immobile as he makes his descent into me.

"I've been waiting centuries for this moment to come, hold still host! You belong to me now."

I kick and shout as I feel his ghostly paws melt into my back, slowly digging deeper into me.

"Noooo!!!!! Guy's...argh! Help meh!!"

I try my best to struggle against the people holding me still but I'm no match for them. I look across and see max doing his best to keep them off of thunder, nova is being backed to the walk as druk is hit in the back of the head and crumbled up on the floor. Ricky, eptio, fluffy and roxy are holding their ground.

The wizards are forming a circle around me and casting their magic over me. Tianu's calling up a spell of her own to shroud us in a protected bubble when a guard slams into her.

"What are you doing, you fool!!"

She looks up in time to see ricky and fluffy charging at her. She continues the spell as the wizards are all speaking in unison around me. Croya slowly slips down into my back, his specter arm's push themselves into mine and he flinched my paws. With a grin on his muzzle, he pushes his head in through me and I scream in pain as his spirit aligns itself with my body. Patches of orange fur sprout on my back and a third fox tail forms behind me.

"Hnngh....get...out...of....me.."

I snarl as my eyes glow brightly. Tianu is watching with joy, everyone that was fighting hears the commotion and stops to see. Nova, thunder, max, fluffy, and roxy are shoving they're way through to stop it. My hyena appearance starts to fade as I look more like a fox again, but not the same fox.

I look over to roxy, and whine from the searing pain in my head as croya tries to assert his dominance over me.

"Fluffy, fire one of those orbs at him! Maybe it'll knock that fox-spirit out!" max suggested.

"Do it now!" roxy begs looking at me groaning.

Fluffy stares at me and calls up the most powerful orb she can make. Tianu sees a glowing light coming from her and stopped her protection spell to make an attack fireball on fluffy, the wizard's are oblivious to what's happening around them to complete the casting ritual.

Fluffy releases the white orb towards me, the wizard's are finishing their spell as a silvery mist flows around my body. I am straining to resist the fox invader and I start to thrash around in my circle for control.

"Nooo!" Tianu shouted seeing the ball fired at the ceremony.

She sends her fireball at it but the mist draws them both together and explodes as croya let's out a mighty roar. The entire room is blinded from a extremely bright flash and a shockwave pushes everyone to the floor, shattering all the windows.

Even tianu's knocked back into her servants on the floor from the force.

When it starts to wear off everybody got up to find a startling image before them. Lying there on the floor were two people, a blue and orange fox taur with three tails and built very tough. Four feet away lays a blue spotted hyena anthro with a foxes tail. In ripped shredded clothes, my blond hair covering my face.

The whole room gasp in shock from the sight, no one dared move to see if either are alive.

"Holy jeez! What happened to them, there's two now!?" Max asked pointed to us on the floor. They all turned in surprise to hear tianu just as startled by this as they are.

"This has never been heard of happening...perhaps the powers me and that fennec fired along with croya's spirit mist absorbed the energy and exploded. Twisting they're forms and separating them..."

Thunder, max, fluffy, roxy, eptio, ricky, druk and nova all stared at the two forms wondering if I survived at all. Even tianu couldn't believe her jackal eye's at the scene.

Suddenly the both of us woke up and I crawled up off the floor holding my head in my paws. The taur rose up and wobbled a few steps as he tried to get his balance. We noticed each other and I realized I'm standing on two plantigrade legs now.

"Ugh...H-how in the bloody hell did this happen!? These aren't my normal legs!" I glare at the taur in anger.

"You...you did this to me..."

He flexed his arms and is admiring himself as I look at him. Turning towards me croya smiled.

"Yes I did, although this wasn't the desired effect. You should have been consumed by my control and wiped out your entire existence to my power. But something kept you from being wiped out, your love for that ferret there. I felt it when I gained your heart. You love her very much just as I loved tianu with all of mine. In that sense we are the same. Therefore the spell saw nothing to overwrite and when they're orb attack intervened It gave off more than enough power to remake the both of us in a new body."


We all just stood there like statues taking what the bluish orange foxtaur said in. It seemed impossible but here I am standing here again almost as I was the first day I came to anthropolis except I'm now more a hyena than the blue fox I once was. Croya has taken most of that from me but my tail and my electrics ability.

That belonged to me only. I suddenly felt two arms wrap around me and I see auburn colored hair and the bluest eye's looking back at me. My ferret is hugging and kissing my muzzle, I hold onto her and tears stream down both our muzzles.

Tianu was experiencing the same with croya, after being separated for centuries and now at each others fingertips they embraced and smiled. It was the first time any of us had seen her show an actually nice smile with no evil intent. He has calmed her hatred significantly.

"You have given me back someone I never thought I'd see again in my life kit, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. For this, I will allow you all safe passage to go. Now that I have croya again we will fix this world as we started out a long time ago."

"Just as soon as I have my revenge on those who brought my death and shamed you for It. Then we will make this place a lot better. And thank you kit, very much. Good luck to you."

He offers a paw out to me to shake. Holding roxy next to me, I reach out and shake his paw.

"Just don't go trying to come kill us all again ok? We've got enough troubles as it is already."


"No promises, we may come pay you a visit sometime." Tianu said with a laugh.

All the guards bowed on the floor to croya's return to the castle and we left while we had the moment. Waving farewell, we fled the castle to find our way back to our home dimension. I got the privilege of driving the hummer.

So now our gang is out of the nightmare and on their way to the place they all were happy before. But will everything be alright?

Find out in the first chapter of season two when I finally get it together. Hope it's a good one!

End of Chapter 14 of Adv. In Anthro by Kit Riley.

Seeya later!
Finally after a long break I've gotten together a final chapter for the first series I've ever made. It was a tough one to make too, hopefully it's a good read though.
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I have a few questions about that scene where Kit cried:

"I hold onto her and tears stream down both our muzzles."

1. When Kit was crying, did his tears specifically stream down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and off the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and onto his lower jaw

2. Exactly how would Kit react and what would he say to me if I hugged him and licked those tears streaming down his muzzle with my tongue? Because every time I read the scene where he cries, I fantasize licking every last tear from Kit's muzzle.

3. On a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, exactly how salty would Kit's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle?

4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being frozen and 10 being scalding hot, where would you rate the temperature of Kit's tears as they streamed down his muzzle?

I know these questions sound weird but PLEASE reply back!